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Good luck Eunice ^^
Corrections:
I have a 1 minute speech test at school.
Correct: I have a one-minute speech at school.
So I wish you can correct the mistakes in the speech.
Correct: I wish you can correct the mistakes in the speech.
I wish I could get the reply as fast as you can. Thank you very much^^
Correct: I hope you reply as fast as you can. Thank you very much^^
Speech
Each people has lots of things they are good at.
Correct: Each person has a lot of things that they are good at.
These things can be called as ones talents.
Correct: These things are what we call talents.
Correct: The talent I have is catching.
Before our teacher gave out chocolates in class. I left my chocolote on my friend desk, way at the back.
Correct: Before our teacher gave out chocolates in class, I left my chocolate on my friend’s desk, who was sitting at the back.
Correct: I told her to throw it before the teacher looks back.
However she throwed it too hard. I thought I was unable to catch it.
Correct: Unfortunately, she threw it hard I thought I would not be able to catch it.
But when I looked at my hand the chocolote was there.
Correct: Yet when I looked at my habd, the chocolate was there.
The people around me had a suprised face, and I knew that I caught the chocolote.
Correct: The people around me were surprised to see that I incredibly caught the chocolate.
This kind of situation is common and I am also one of the the good catchers in girls in class.
Correct: This kind of situation is common and I am also one of the good catchers among the girls in class.
However catching is not the only talent I have and I wish I can develop other talents that would be usable for me.
Correct: However catching is not the only talent I have and I wish I could develop other talents that would be useful for me.
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