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I like exercise.
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>> I like to exercise.
Sccer, basketball, table tennis, baseball, and just jogging or walking.
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>> Soccer, basketball, table tennis, baseball, jogging and walking.
Bcause exercise gives health and vigor to us.
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>> Because exercising makes us healthy and give us energy.
Of course, health is very important and everyone knows this fact.
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But,with health, vigor is important too.
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>> But with health, vigor is important too.
If we are vigorous everyday, people around me would be given
good influence.
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>> If we are energetic every day, people around us would be influenced.
So we can do anything plesanly, and than it raises working efficience up.
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>> So we can work pleasantly and efficiently.
therefore, we can work better.
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>>Therefore, we can work better.
when I do something with other people, i want to do enjoyably and efficently.
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>> When I work with other people, I want it to be enjoyable and efficient.
that's why i like exercise, and always encourage close people to exercise.
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>> That is why I like to exercise and I always encourage people who are close to me to exercise.
Because it should give good thing to us, 'vigor'
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| 2013-03-07 |
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